The sample work
Reflection
What did I learn
At the first 2 weeks of this quarter the teacher gave us new vocabulary per each week. Such as, implacable, paroxysm, reprehensible, jurisdiction, skirmish, harass, monolithic, indigent, arbitrary, and fray. Then the teacher introduced us about MLA format for making research paper and for making essay for other subjects. In this quarter we have to make research paper about violation issue around the world. So, I chose sexual harassment in Pakistan for my topic. Another assignment for this quarter is book review, We have to submit the assignment at the end of the quarter.
Why was this sample my best work
I chose the human rights research paper for my sample work because I put a lot of effort to do this essay. At the beginning I got stress to make the essay, I didn't understand what I have to do. I'm struggling to choose a topic and to make the thesis, but the teacher help me some.
What did I do well
The human rights research paper is my best score at all because I could achieve my goals for criterion C, I got 7 for it. From the teacher's comment I could engage confidently in rehearsed, unrehearsed exchange to share variety of informative, and organise idea on range of topics of personal and global significance.
How can I Improve/ do differently
I have to improve my criterion D for using language because I still get score under 5. I still need to increase my vocabulary list and use them appropriately. I hope I get better score in the next quarter.
At the first 2 weeks of this quarter the teacher gave us new vocabulary per each week. Such as, implacable, paroxysm, reprehensible, jurisdiction, skirmish, harass, monolithic, indigent, arbitrary, and fray. Then the teacher introduced us about MLA format for making research paper and for making essay for other subjects. In this quarter we have to make research paper about violation issue around the world. So, I chose sexual harassment in Pakistan for my topic. Another assignment for this quarter is book review, We have to submit the assignment at the end of the quarter.
Why was this sample my best work
I chose the human rights research paper for my sample work because I put a lot of effort to do this essay. At the beginning I got stress to make the essay, I didn't understand what I have to do. I'm struggling to choose a topic and to make the thesis, but the teacher help me some.
What did I do well
The human rights research paper is my best score at all because I could achieve my goals for criterion C, I got 7 for it. From the teacher's comment I could engage confidently in rehearsed, unrehearsed exchange to share variety of informative, and organise idea on range of topics of personal and global significance.
How can I Improve/ do differently
I have to improve my criterion D for using language because I still get score under 5. I still need to increase my vocabulary list and use them appropriately. I hope I get better score in the next quarter.
Key Concept: Connection
On this quarter we have to research violation issue in one country that we have chosen. I think The teacher wants us to know connection between the country's issue and the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.